Revised Working Outline

Thesis Statement: This paper will argue that the working poor in Japan society is problem because it deprives people of human dignity, causes exploding cost of social insurance and accelerate declining birth rate in Japan.

Outline:
1. Introduction
topic plus thesis statement
-lose human dignity
-exploding cost of social insurance
-accelerate declining birth rate in Japan

2. Current situation
a. -poverty inherits from generation to generation
-Many working poor can’t have place to live
-No chance to escape from working poor･Very weak labor relation (irregular worker)

b.-unemployment insurance and livelihood protection weaken the incentive of looking for new job.
-some local government give financial support to working poor.･these welfare press governmental finance

c.-working poor tend to be single(have no child).

3. Problems
a. working poor lose human dignity
b. exploding cost of social insurance
c. acceleate decclining of birth rate in japan

4. Possible solutions
-give public job and educational support to working poor
-reform social insurance schemes
-job sharing

5. Conclusion